Friendly protip from a native French speaker: you DO NOT want to name your heroine “Bijou”. I don’t care if “Jewel” is a legit name in English, do not do it.
Ok, maaaaybe it could pass… if your protagonist happens to be a small yappy dog. A male one.
Okay, if the point of being a Jedi is to surpress all passion, fine. Okay. Sure, even Vulcans get to cut loose once every seven years, but I suppose...”